{"id":16,"date":"2015-01-27T21:58:36","date_gmt":"2015-01-27T21:58:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/clippi5708.wpengine.com\/?p=16"},"modified":"2019-12-02T08:43:25","modified_gmt":"2019-12-02T08:43:25","slug":"what-editors-look-for-when-commissioning","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/what-editors-look-for-when-commissioning\/","title":{"rendered":"Three Things All Editors Look For When Commissioning From New Writers"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Years ago, when I was starting out in journalism, I attended a &quot;getting started in freelancing&quot; course given by the travel editor of a prominent British newspaper. Being a keen young hack, I took copious notes, scribbling down everything I thought would be useful one day, but as it happened there was only one page I kept referring to as I fired off pitch after pitch.<\/p>\n<p>As I review articles for the clippings.me blog on a near-daily basis nowadays, it strikes me that the advice I relied on for years was spot on, so I&#8217;m republishing her key ideas here, along with some of my own thoughts. Happy pitching.<\/p>\n<p>The ingredients of a winning pitch:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Credibility<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>It doesn&#8217;t matter how passionately you feel about the subject, or how creative your idea is. Fundamentally, I need to believe that you&#8217;re qualified to tell this story. For <a href=\"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/category\/travel-writing\/\" class=\"wpil_internal_link\" >travel writing,<\/a> I have to believe you know enough about the region\/subject in question to write an informative piece (have you lived there? Do you speak the language? Have you had a piece published about this already?). For articles on this blog, I need to believe you&#8217;ve interviewed some pretty big celebrities before I&#8217;ll risk my reputation on commissioning &quot;How to land an interview with a superstar&quot; from you.<\/p>\n<p>My tip: Briefly establish your credibility in the first paragraph of your pitch. Come up with a reusable one-liner if you&#8217;re a subject specialist &#8211; it&#8217;ll save you a ton of time.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Relevance<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>This sounds obvious, but you&#8217;d be amazed at how nuanced a good pitch needs to be and how many people get this wrong. First, we&#8217;ll start with the obvious: if I run a travel magazine, don&#8217;t pitch a story about politics, even if you think it could be an interesting new direction for my publication. Editors have their pick of stories and nine times out of ten, they&#8217;re going to go with what they know. When you have repeat commissions and have built a strong relationship with an editor, you might be given the time of day. But as a stranger, you need to channel that creativity and minimise the risk for yourself and the editor in question.<\/p>\n<p>Secondly, pay attention to the detail. A classic example of this can be found in travel writing &#8211; many publications prefer to focus on a particular travel interest, for instance, and will never deviate far from their niche of &quot;family or couples holidays for middle-income households with readers aged 20-50&quot;. Others may stipulate that featured destinations need to be a direct flight of under eight hours from their readership base. You need to know these details to nail the pitch relevance, and in many cases, a casual scan of the articles isn&#8217;t going to give you that detail.<\/p>\n<p>My tip: Stay safe on your first pitch &#8211; pick a format you know that the publication runs regularly, and adapt it within the boundaries which are obvious. For a blog, the format could be a review post, for a glossy magazine it could be a &quot;What&#8217;s On&quot; list. Pitch something within that format with minimal adaptation.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Pitch Structure<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Get the above two right, and you have a very reasonable story that an editor will trust you to write. Now, all you have to do is not mess it up by ruining the editor&#8217;s belief in your ability to deliver. And all editors will judge a new writer&#8217;s ability to deliver by their ability to pitch.<\/p>\n<p>My tips:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>\n<p>Make it short &#8211; no more than two paragraphs, and ideally one. If you can&#8217;t capture the idea in that, it&#8217;s too complex (or you can&#8217;t be succinct, which is arguably worse).<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<p>Start with a hook. It can surprise me, it can scare me, it can make me laugh, it can even anger me (although it&#8217;s a high risk strategy), but it needs to capture my interest immediately. If you&#8217;ve followed the points above, I&#8217;m bought into your ability to deliver and the format you&#8217;re proposing. So don&#8217;t let me down with a boring first sentence &#8211; bring it to life straight away.<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<p>Write with colour. Not with actual colours, obviously. But if you&#8217;re a talented journalist, you should be able to write anything with the flair and fluidity you&#8217;ll bring to the piece you&#8217;re hoping to have published. So pay attention to your cadence, your voice and your choice of words. The atmosphere you create in these sentences should leave an editor wanting more.<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<p>Don&#8217;t be prescriptive. Often, good articles start off with a totally different pitch which is then shaped into something else by the editor and the journalist &#8211; and that&#8217;s fine. So try not to give the impression that this is the story you absolutely must tell, because the editor may want to take a different path.<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<p>Keep it tight and rational. Editors don&#8217;t need to hear the whole story, but they do need to understand the structure of what you&#8217;re proposing. Allude to the themes you&#8217;re considering to make it clear that this isn&#8217;t a half-baked idea, but don&#8217;t let your thoughts run away with you. To get an example of how this looks in practice, read the blurb on the back of a few book jackets. Think of the story pitch as a beautifully-crafted wireframe you&#8217;ll hang the whole piece off, complete with a beginning, middle and end.<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Years ago, when I was starting out in journalism, I attended a &quot;getting started in freelancing&quot; course given by the travel editor of a prominent British newspaper. Being a keen young hack, I took copious notes, scribbling down everything I thought would be useful one day, but as it happened there was only one page &hellip;<\/p>\n<p class=\"read-more\"> <a class=\"\" href=\"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/what-editors-look-for-when-commissioning\/\"> <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Three Things All Editors Look For When Commissioning From New Writers<\/span> Read More &raquo;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"site-sidebar-layout":"default","site-content-layout":"default","ast-global-header-display":"","ast-banner-title-visibility":"","ast-main-header-display":"","ast-hfb-above-header-display":"","ast-hfb-below-header-display":"","ast-hfb-mobile-header-display":"","site-post-title":"","ast-breadcrumbs-content":"","ast-featured-img":"","footer-sml-layout":"","theme-transparent-header-meta":"","adv-header-id-meta":"","stick-header-meta":"","header-above-stick-meta":"","header-main-stick-meta":"","header-below-stick-meta":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[2],"tags":[3,15],"class_list":["post-16","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-freelance-writing","tag-clippings-me","tag-pitching"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/16"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=16"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/16\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":749,"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/16\/revisions\/749"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=16"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=16"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.clippings.me\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=16"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}